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Old 12-04-2008, 04:43 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Welcome to the six word game. Basically, the idea is to tell the most descriptive short story with 6 words or less. This is inspired by Hemingway, who once wrote this little gem, "For sale: baby shoes, never worn."

It's very short and to the point, but it is definitely a story. What's your best attempt at telling a story in 6 words or less? What's your best attempt at flash fiction?



A few quick attempts:

"Damnit, I ran out of bullets."

Army came, city no longer thrives.

Dad never got a fair trial.
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Old 12-06-2008, 09:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Victoria received her food later on.


(( Would words like they're count as one or two words))
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Old 12-08-2008, 02:22 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Oh no, what happened to Fred?
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Old 12-09-2008, 05:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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The weather changed thrice, hitherto unwell.

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(( Would words like they're count as one or two words))
Depends on context. If the meaning demands it as one word, such as in dialogue, I say it's one word. If you're just trying to cram more words into the story so it will fit in the limit, then no.

And remember it's a six word story. Not just some random six words that state something.
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She barely screamed, and BANG! Silence.
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Three people, one secret, two deaths.

Missing girl saw axeman in mirror.

Together at last... in shallow grave.

After seventeen years, marriage finally fails.
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Sam played a game...and failed.
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They watched him leave in silence.
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She saw his look of disappointment.
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He cradled her in his arms.
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Storm quiets after the witch's death.
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Chandra raped Cosmo then got shot.

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