| The Lounge We can't all be in character the whole time. Come here and relax, take a load off, and get to know the players behind those pretty characters. | 12-04-2008, 04:43 AM | #1 (permalink) | | our stories are singular... Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 691 | Six Words Welcome to the six word game. Basically, the idea is to tell the most descriptive short story with 6 words or less. This is inspired by Hemingway, who once wrote this little gem, "For sale: baby shoes, never worn." It's very short and to the point, but it is definitely a story. What's your best attempt at telling a story in 6 words or less? What's your best attempt at flash fiction?
A few quick attempts: "Damnit, I ran out of bullets." Army came, city no longer thrives. Dad never got a fair trial. | | | 12-06-2008, 09:53 PM | #2 (permalink) | | human scrabble board <33 Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 106 | Victoria received her food later on. (( Would words like they're count as one or two words)) | | | 12-08-2008, 02:22 AM | #3 (permalink) | | ...but our destiny is shared Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 388 | Oh no, what happened to Fred? | | | 12-09-2008, 05:51 AM | #4 (permalink) | | our stories are singular... Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 691 | The weather changed thrice, hitherto unwell. Quote: Originally Posted by Sam (( Would words like they're count as one or two words)) | Depends on context. If the meaning demands it as one word, such as in dialogue, I say it's one word. If you're just trying to cram more words into the story so it will fit in the limit, then no. And remember it's a six word story. Not just some random six words that state something. | | | 12-10-2008, 10:54 PM | #5 (permalink) | | Retired Staff Retired Staff Join Date: Nov 16, 2008 Posts: 50 | She barely screamed, and BANG! Silence. | | | 12-11-2008, 10:22 AM | #6 (permalink) | | our stories are singular... Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 691 | Three people, one secret, two deaths. Missing girl saw axeman in mirror. Together at last... in shallow grave. After seventeen years, marriage finally fails. | | | 12-13-2008, 12:13 AM | #7 (permalink) | | human scrabble board <33 Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 106 | Sam played a game...and failed. | | | 12-15-2008, 10:48 AM | #8 (permalink) | | the golden god of spam <33 Retired Staff Join Date: Nov 06, 2008 Posts: 65 | They watched him leave in silence. | | | 12-19-2008, 07:02 PM | #9 (permalink) | | our stories are singular... Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 691 | She saw his look of disappointment. | | | 12-20-2008, 04:59 PM | #10 (permalink) | | Retired Staff Retired Staff Join Date: Nov 16, 2008 Posts: 50 | He cradled her in his arms. | | | 12-22-2008, 11:58 PM | #11 (permalink) | | our stories are singular... Join Date: Nov 04, 2008 Posts: 691 | Storm quiets after the witch's death. | | | 01-11-2009, 06:56 PM | #12 (permalink) | | Administrator Join Date: Dec 11, 2008 Posts: 69 | Chandra raped Cosmo then got shot. (hehehehee) | | | 01-13-2009, 11:27 AM | #13 (permalink) | | Junior Member Join Date: Dec 23, 2008 Posts: 2 | Gym Teacher Knocks Up Head Cheerleader | | | Posting Rules | You may not post new threads You may not post replies You may not post attachments You may not edit your posts HTML code is Off | | | All times are GMT -5. The time now is 11:50 PM. |