One quick thing: matter molding doesn't have anything to do with anything smaller than the molecular level. Thus, it has nothing to do with the atomic structure (protons, neutrons, and electrons) of the matter; any changes to the atomic level would be unintentional or as a result of naturally-occurring chemical reactions.
Also as a note, it's "unpowered" humans, not "underpowered" humans, you should go through with a find and replace and fix those. Furthermore, induced powers often have no conflict with natural powers. If Adrian has an induced power that manifests oddly, it should not be because there was a conflict with his DNA structure. In fact, the loci for most induced powers and inherited powers are entirely different and should never come into contact.
Fix these little errors, and you should be good to go.
Though, I am curious, where would he get the alcohol? A lot of people would be interested in drowning their sorrows, but I don't think too many breweries are operational.
PS: as a friendly reminder, your writing tends to get a little dense and awkwardly constructed. Good writing is direct, powerful, and to the point. Subject-verb is still the way to go. Don't write any sentences longer than what you can control. | 
12-22-2008, 07:42 PM 
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